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Was It Only Lust
Contributed by
bluedragonfly
on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 03:10:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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She held her compsure
When he told her
He had found
His old love
Thru her heart
He put a knife
As he told her
She was going to be
His wife
While holding back the tears
She wished them happiness
Realizing
What she had lost
For him
Was it only lust?
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2004-06-16 15:10:31]
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Re: Was It Only Lust
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 12:32:48 PM AEST
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| I like the way you put this. |
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Re: Was It Only Lust
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by freckle on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 10:41:50 PM AEST
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You relayed the emotions well in this poem. Short and to the point. Good write!
Carol |
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