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At last
Contributed by
Luckycharm
on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 04:10:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Here we are,
In love,
I remember when I first saw you,
And when I looked into your eyes,
I knew that there was something about you,
That made me feel so warm inside,
We began to get to know each other,
Then we fell in love,
That was so deep,
You have showed me that,
You love and care for me,
How can I live without,
Your beautiful smile,
And the love you have for me,
He has unsealed my heart,
So I can be in love,
At night when it begins to rain,
And I'm all alone,
As I lay in my bed,
I image you holding me,
So tight and I never,
Wan't you to let go,
Of me,
Your love is like the wind,
That flows so free,
And it mends my heart,
It also sets my soul free,
I don't know what I would do,
If I ever lost you,
You are my shining star,
That shines so bright,
Reminding me that I am loved,
I'm happy that we are finally together,
At last
Copyright ©
Luckycharm
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2004-06-16 16:10:10]
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Re: At last
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by MusicGurl3291 on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 04:23:28 PM AEST
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Hey,
That was pretty good. It could just be me but poems that catch my attention the most are ryming ones. You dont have that mush ryming but its probubly just me. There is lots of good info in there.
Nice
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Re: At last
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 04:25:29 PM AEST
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very pretty, you might want to make a few more comments yourself and let people get to know you better, your poetry stands on its own, i felt bad for your note, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: At last
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by Rhei76 on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 08:22:34 AM AEST
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| Nicely done. |
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