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Shhhhh
Contributed by
jillian_f006
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Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 04:24:44 PM in AEST
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I cant let you it
I wont show anyone
The pain that is inside
I hurt so much
I hide the pain so well
I dont want to be alone,
But I dont want everyones pity
I cant find a way
To say what needs to be said
Instead of the way, I find myself a blade
That one little line makes me feel real
Its make the pain just disappear
No one understands that but me
You think i'm weird, and I guess I am
Once you start you cannot stop
Ive lost control Norm told me that
I have so much rage
Where can it go?
It comes out of me
And is taken out on me too
My friends do not know
I cant allow that
They will think its grade 9 all over again
I will keep all my pain quite
And hide all my wounds
I will cry to myself and
I will pray that this stops
I wont tell ma
Cause I dont want to hurt her
This is me. I try to be silent
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Re: Shhhhh
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 04:31:20 PM AEST
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| you are so considerate to be thinking of others and making them your first priority, even though you feel this and are going through it. very noble in a sense. feelings can change that is all i can say. very well expressed piece. |
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Re: Shhhhh
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by yellow_sundragon on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 05:43:23 PM AEST
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People think that your weird because you cut yourself to feel better, but I understand... though I don't do it anymore, I know that that one little cut is all you need for release... and it becomes an addiction... that you need so bad... your not weird.... for if you are, then so are most of the rest of us...
Great poem.....
*J* |
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Re: Shhhhh
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by Luinil on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 08:31:16 PM AEST
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| i know how you're feeling cause i've been there too. sometimes it can get better... you're writing is beautiful and you express yourself very well * |
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Re: Shhhhh
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by pixie on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 05:58:06 AM AEST
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greatly written...... i know where you're coming from you are not alone
pixie xx |
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