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You Don’t Understand
Contributed by
willow_tara72002
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Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 04:36:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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You dont understand What Im going through. You wont understand Why I cant be around you, This time Cause how much this hurts me.
I feel paranoid, scared and alone. You dont understand I cant be near you Not right now, not now You dont understand The pain I feel is real How I cant seem to heal And how much this hurts me
I cant explain Why I need to be alone Id tell you why, But I would just die Youd laugh at me And you cant see Just how much this hurts me.
I want to be with you, But I have this issue I cant tell you why Because I would cry, Why should I try Cause you dont like who I really am. This is a part of me, dont you see Cant you see the pain this causes me Cant you see the pain this causes me Cant you see the pain this causes me Cant you see the pain you cause me
When you say what you said You just dont understand How much this hurts me How much this hurts me How much this hurts me
And you dont understand,
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Re: You Don’t Understand
(User Rating: 1 ) by luckycharm on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 04:40:51 PM AEST (User
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Don't worry about him because you can find better and I know how you feel, cause I have been there before. Just don't let him hurt your heart bad and hang in there for me okay.-luckycharm. |
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Re: You Don’t Understand
(User Rating: 1 ) by purplestary on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 05:28:12 PM AEST (User
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great write! such a sadening one though. i hope your pain goes away soon. |
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Re: You Don’t Understand
(User Rating: 1 ) by yellow_sundragon on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 05:40:10 PM AEST (User
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I like the way you use repetition to get your point across, very good poem...
heartrenchingly sad, though.... |
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Re: You Don’t Understand
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 06:04:25 AM AEST (User
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this must be awful for you, thank you for sharing, thank you for being brave...
pixie xx |
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