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THE BREEZE
Contributed by
Randyjohnson
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Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 08:21:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The wind was blowing and it was blowing hard.
But it couldn't blow my problems away; they're not so easy to discard.
While walking, I just wanted my mind to be put to ease.
I kept walking along the coast all the time feeling the breeze.
As I walked, I contemplated the terrible shape the world is in.
Some are corrupted by greed, some are corrupted by sin.
The breeze was so strong, it nearly knocked me down.
It reminded me of how the little man always gets pushed around.
I finished my journey when I came across some palm trees.
Like my problems with society, they were shaking from the breeze.
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Randyjohnson
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2004-06-16 20:21:08]
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Re: THE BREEZE
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by Seans_Girl on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 08:27:17 PM AEST
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| How very true that poem is! |
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Re: THE BREEZE
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by buchi on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 11:54:57 AM AEST
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| Metaphoric delight... love problems and palm trees... must read ur next.. |
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