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the sullen child
Contributed by
InnerBeautyQueen
on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 09:36:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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eyes like ice, watery blue, with a frozen stare the windows to the soul inside cold and morbid, absent of life free from feeling, alone
hair like golden silk, gleaming and light the curls forced out, made to be straight words would slide off, so nothing could touch her porcelain face
slender and small, her limbs looked so fragile her skirt was torn and dirty her blouse was missing buttons her body stained with congealed blood
she didnt walk, she floated and stalked she had more daggers and knives than space she beamed from a light shining from some other place to looked to solid to be alive
her wings were black she looked so young to be so old she was two hundred though she looked five stained and tainted by too hard a life
her halo died so long ago some now doubt its original existence no one remembers her beautiful smile so now shes become the sullen child
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Re: the sullen child
(User Rating: 1 ) by DerPinguin44 on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 09:40:21 PM AEST (User
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This one made me stop and say, "WHOA!"
Good job, actually, FIVE OUT OF FIVE! |
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