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craving for what i've never tasted
Contributed by
taintedorange21
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Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 10:56:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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watching your eyes follow me and your lips as you speak never! have i met someone with the personality you flaunt you're so different, but you are the definition of HOT i can't fall for you, you're not like my others
yet i walk away feeling more than high from the touch of you on i it was just a simple kiss but it gave my stomach butterflies i can't fall for you, you're not like my others
we're gonna have to meet up again some time as my tongue played with my teeth my voice sounding nervous as i looked at my feet *breathe* i have to show you my world and you show me yours i explained: don't get me wrong this has nothing to do with touching, feeling, tasting any of you and yes i would mind...i would mind a lot because you're not like my others
i jus got an infatuation with your smile your eyes, watching your lips as you talk of what could be of tomorrows sunrise i'm addicted to your voice the curve of your cheeks and the way your hair falls into your eyes i didn't find myself feeling this with my others
at first i desired nothing more than to talk but we walked, talked and you kissed me goodnight and after you walked away...i was glad you were nothing like my others
*oh the joy of finding someone different from the rest (david) my apprimelon flavored kiwi
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Re: craving for what i've never tasted
(User Rating: 1 ) by recklessguy on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 02:27:38 AM AEST (User
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Re: craving for what i've never tasted
(User Rating: 1 ) by Asatru on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 08:55:29 AM AEST (User
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I enjoyed it all but I loved stanza four. Keep writing. |
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