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I could never do to you
Contributed by
holderofthestone
on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 12:21:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I could never do to you
what you did to me
I could never run away
when you were in need
I could never lie to you
I wouldnt tell you wrong
I could never be away
from your side for very long
I could never stand to see
you with another guy
I could never bring myself
for you to see me cry
I could never turn my back
and leave you empty handed
I could never ignore you
and take your love for granted
but what I could never do
the only one I see
I could never make you
fall in love with me
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holderofthestone
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2004-06-17 00:21:06]
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Re: I could never do to you
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by UnfallenTears on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 12:52:42 AM AEST
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| Heart-wrenching... an all too familiar feeling |
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Re: I could never do to you
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by shelby on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 01:01:05 AM AEST
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hauntingly sad beautiful in words so sorry for the pain though
michelle |
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Re: I could never do to you
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by emystar on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 01:03:53 AM AEST
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Interesting write.
Hang tuff,
huggs, luv,
emy |
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Re: I could never do to you
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by Calista on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 01:25:51 AM AEST
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Holder, you did it again! congratualtions. i think im going to have to steal you and hide you away so only i can hear your beautiful poetry. that wouldnt be fair tho...lol hang in there and hold the gift.
Calista |
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Re: I could never do to you
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 02:31:42 AM AEST
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I read the title, and finished teh verse...correctly...we do have similar writing styles and minds when it comes to our situation...I enjoy it tho...this one gave me chills down my spine..great write!!!! as always...
much love,
Dani
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Re: I could never do to you
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by pixie on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 07:17:59 AM AEST
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very emotional, sorry for your pain, greatly written tho
pixie xx |
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Re: I could never do to you
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by blueheart on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 09:30:57 PM AEST
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Familiar, oh so familiar feelings.
Great write. |
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Re: I could never do to you
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by BrandySwanson on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 12:54:41 AM AEST
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oh so sad sorry for your pain.very emotional write. well done
Brandy |
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Re: I could never do to you
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by xXxFaygoFetishxXx on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 02:44:25 AM AEST
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Those last two lines are so familiar.
Its one of the worst feelings in the world.
And for me it hasn't fully gone away.
Your a gifted writer, very good at conveying emotions and creating vivid images.
Keep writing.
::Elizabeth:: |
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Re: I could never do to you
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by drummerchic18 on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 09:31:25 PM AEST
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| taking the words right out of my mouth....you seem to know how to express yourself..good for you and keep it up! |
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