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Never Tell
Contributed by
brigitte7735
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Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 03:02:53 AM in AEST
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Ripe for plucking, you can see it in my eyes
Ageless act as skirt barely grazes my thighs
Promises drip of knowledge beyond my years
Excitement erects when testosterone nears
Funny the thoughts that cross my juvenile mind
As I lay in a false security confined
Necktie feigns rope but can only do one hand
To let the other roam down to my waistband
Are persistently lectured how sex is a sin
Shun the fabrications that the devil spins
Yes, but I want you...to want me...to be pretty
Aren't allowed to let you have me, so force me
Take me, any way you want, I've wished for this day
Throw me down on the ground and have your way
Hurt me, show them I'd fight for my chastity
I'll never tell how much I wanted you inside me
Raped, I swear, did everything I could think
Try to prove that I seduced you to the brink
Everyone's aware of the angel I am
Even if God knows, it's you they'll condemn
Never tell...but I'm grateful you desired me that much
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brigitte7735
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Re: Never Tell
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by pixie on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 07:23:50 AM AEST
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wow, i dont know what to say.......i am so sorry for all this, but thanks for being brave and sharing this, god bless you
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Re: Never Tell
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 07:24:56 AM AEST
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| nice work, clever and desciptive. |
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Re: Never Tell
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 10:07:13 PM AEST
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Great write here Vanessa. You have some very wonderful rhymes and a great write all together. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Never Tell
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by Silent-No-More on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 03:59:21 PM AEST
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Wow - this is honest. And brave. Finding a way to reconcile what you're directed on the outside with what you feel on the inside CAN be nearly impossible sometimes. In the end, nothing matters more than finding your own answer. The WHO matters more than the WHAT sometims if you ask me. Being "safe" means protecting your heart and your soul too - not just your body. But... I'm sure you don't need me to tell you that.
This is a powerful, frank piece. I absolutely applaud you for it!
Not nearly as brave as you,
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Re: Never Tell
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by forever_lonely on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 08:18:38 PM AEST
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Im not really sure on how i should comment on this
Poetically wise its perfect which over the last 18 or so poems i have come to almost expect as i do with all of my favorite artists on this site, which by the way way you had now a very very very firm standing
As for the content, frank would be but a ill-used word, certainly brave as some have used is but an understatement.
I think the only thing i can say without completely starting to go back on myself for saying it is it puts things into a very clear perspective.
An amazing write, powerful is but not strong enough to express the emotion within this write it really isnt
Well done very well done
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Re: Never Tell
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by arden on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 11:11:44 AM AEST
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sad yet very powerful. your rhyme was amazing. this was a great write. so deep and so full of emotion.
nicely done.
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