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THE LAST BREATH-1

Contributed by docpardue on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 03:28:50 AM in AEST
Topic: war

WHERE AM I?I am afraid
Your in the hospitalits okayI will stay right here for you
I dont hurt anymore but it is hard to breathe
I have given you something to take care of the pain
Promise me you will stay until I go
Dont worryI am here just for youyoure my date tonight

Your hair looks like my moms when she pulls her back
I bet she is very proud of you
You smell just like the lemon trees back home
I am Kathleen, my friends call me Kath
My name is Tom but the guys call me Sunshine cause I am from Florida

Kath, youre so beautiful
Thanks, you aint so bad yourself, you got a girl back home
No one special, just friends, I am only 19
Kathdoes it hurt to die? I am seeing a bright lightKath I dont want to go
Tommy, its wonderful where you are going

Tommy go in peace my friend
I am sure am glad I got to know you
Thats it let it all out, I am here for you, helping you cross over
Close your eyes follow the light
I love you Tommy, you are my Sunshine

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Re: THE LAST BREATH-1 (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 06:08:50 AM AEST
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Awww...you make this sad event seem so beautiful and peaceful....and a joy to experience.... Good write....
Jenni

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