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A Single Rose
Contributed by
tamilyn
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Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 05:57:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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One single rose
Ever alone in a field
Yearning for companionship
Wanting to be held
One single petal
Falling to the ground
Needing to be saved
But no one is around
One single dewdrop
Nurturing the rose
Preserving the beauty
For the eyes of those
One single twinkling star
Over this field it chose
To smile down with love
At one single rose
Copyright: Tammy Hendershot
2004
Copyright ©
tamilyn
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2004-06-17 05:57:47]
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Re: A Single Rose
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 06:03:49 AM AEST
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awww...
this is the second poem from you today
that made me really smile...
maybe it's just me, but i reckon this poem's awfully cute...
i love how you manage to make the last verse in some way continue from the first--
how it sorta connects...
Beautiful write and purely breathtaking!
luv,
katie |
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Re: A Single Rose
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 07:30:41 AM AEST
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Lovely and enchanting.
Thanks for writing. |
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