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Scare
Contributed by
kimi
on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 07:53:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Someone near... where? look around the corner on the street the edge of time at your feet where night slowly drifts up and around your presence taking a hold on your life your thoughts how possibilities are endless we run through time and space to know to learn what we see before us is not always the full complete truth. look at me. what do you see? you don’t see me you see who you think I am who is she? she is not me myself... another whom you would not recognize or understand whose mind is wandering lost out of control when forced or pressured out of control take this mind torture it it has already been more than you can know more than needed why do I have to show the who why not to you the truth? hell is deep but warm.
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kimi
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2004-06-17 07:53:37] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Scare
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 08:02:19 AM AEST (User
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very emotive , great write
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Re: Scare
(User Rating: 1 ) by apollo on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 08:32:57 AM AEST (User
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very compelling. quite deep as well i must say. i enjoyed this wonderful write.
brandon |
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