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Fallacious Love
Contributed by
apollo
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Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 08:27:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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barrels of individuals
sitting. chatting. happy.
children running on the playground
laughing. teasing. enjoying.
friends making friends loving another
together. forever. in denial.
love really isn't love
it is fallacious
composed of emotion.
and written into a poem.
Copyright ©
apollo
... [
2004-06-17 08:27:39]
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Re: Fallacious Love
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 08:37:36 AM AEST
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What a fascinating take. I can see both sides. I really like this. Wonderful, thought-provoking write.
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Re: Fallacious Love
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 08:52:39 AM AEST
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I used to feel like this years ago before I truly found love. I have to disagree with this and my former thoughts but I have to say you placed them perfectly in this work.
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Re: Fallacious Love
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by pixie on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 09:01:18 AM AEST
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this is a good write, well done to you
pixie xx |
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