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-free write-
Contributed by
TaintedOptomist
on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 10:26:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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poetic thoughts will fail you
when you're grasping at straws
held by the gravity of nothing
we fall flat on our faces
and run into the light bloody nosed
cursing existance cos' it's fleeting
...only in america...
a diamond in the rough
everyone's a victim of circumstance
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TaintedOptomist
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2004-06-17 10:26:19]
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Re: -free write-
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 12:29:36 PM AEST
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| well I for one, I love it... you're underestimating this write... great job. |
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