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Hopes Shatter
Contributed by
MDodgen
on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 10:53:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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rays pierce
the dew dropped
world
elves scream
and demons
frolic
the world in
which we live
you scream
with happiness
the feeling
you've lost
tears
down the drain
hopes shatter
against
cold mable
floors
anger is
the one
we all adore
Copyright ©
MDodgen
... [
2004-06-17 10:53:18]
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Re: Hopes Shatter
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by pixie on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 11:19:03 AM AEST
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very powerful poem, a great write Melenie
pixie xx |
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Re: Hopes Shatter
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 12:15:59 AM AEST
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| very nice. your words are strong. I like what you got here. well done!!!! A++++ |
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Re: Hopes Shatter
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 11:39:53 PM AEST
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| excellent write. =] |
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