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Time To Die.
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 11:47:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Pounding fear lives inside.
And the hopeless label eats through my pride.
When I build things, in the end they break.
And I cant live this way, coz my brains starting to flake.
People are now saying that theyre, here to help.
But in the end, it just makes me yelp.
They said I can call the shots, and start to run my life,
And the nurse even said that if it helps me use my knife.
He said weve gotta work on the problems that make me do it.
And if cutting is my comfort, they he thinks I should do it
So now I take my razor in my grasp,
And push it through my layers of scard tissue.
Slowly but surely, I hit my vein at last.
And I leave my body, saying world Ill miss you
Copyright ©
deathdrop
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2004-06-17 11:47:11]
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Re: Time To Die.
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by pixie on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 12:01:46 PM AEST
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this is very heart wrenching, it spoke volumes to me, as I have been where you are now , so can relate
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Re: Time To Die.
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 01:44:58 AM AEST
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Oh Please DeathDrop, do reconsider....no matter how much you want to self destruct.....I know it is a battle, but think of the those you leave behind......if you can't think of you! Please don't harm yourself, because I love you too!
Well written poem.......but it gave me goosebumps....just to think of such a stunt....maddening indeed!
Poetic Hugs
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