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A SONG OF POETRY
Contributed by
joia
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Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 11:57:08 AM in AEST
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Poetry is singing in a monotone
A song bereft of pitch, or tune
Rythym written, note after note
In words of sorrow, faith or fun
A mime's voice given
To an evening star-lit June
It's feelings put to cadence, begging
For a moment you might give it, comfy and
Jammied, softly snuggled in a chair
Snap of embers, glowing firelight
Where eyes instead of ears hum
The melody written there
~joia edwards~
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joia
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2004-06-17 11:57:08]
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Re: A SONG OF POETRY
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by pixie on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 12:03:49 PM AEST
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good poem, and welcome to YPDC
Pixie xx |
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Re: A SONG OF POETRY
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 12:42:09 PM AEST
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Very good description of my favorite past time. Welcome to our home. I think you will truly enjoy the poetry and people here.
Rita |
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Re: A SONG OF POETRY
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 09:39:24 AM AEST
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| This is a good poem. Your first stanza is much better than your second. |
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