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goodbye
Contributed by
idiotbox
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Thursday, 17th October 2002 @ 08:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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so i let you slip through my fingers
you wanted it this way now you will have it
if i had any more love left i would give it
but it's all gone.
so now you can keep what you have
and i'l count my loses and leave
because talking to you is worth less then what i breath
keep your life and your thoughts to yourself
i don't wanna hear it.
stuck in phase in my life i can't take it
so you can leave me alone
you did it
so please don't ask me why
i just have to say nice to know you... goodbye
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2002-10-17 20:45:00]
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Re: goodbye
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 05:59:27 PM AEST
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that last line, almost sounds like an incubus song... great writing, sweet sense of closure - i like!! ;0)
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