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Venting
Contributed by
juliette
on
Friday, 18th October 2002 @ 06:15:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I can't control
how it burns in my soul.
Time is no consolation
for all you have taken.
To imagine your face-
things you can't erase-
Temperature's rising again.
Hurt me to the core
years later, still sore.
Revenge is just easy
and nothing would please me.
Your blood for my tears-
Her screams in my ears-
Temperature's rising again.
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juliette
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2002-10-18 06:15:00]
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Re: Venting
(User Rating: 1 )
by WordPoet on
Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 04:48:06 AM AEST
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| I find this poem conveys a sense of anger and vengence that is clearly defined. Hard to write poetic literature while influenced by emotions like this. Good job. |
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Re: Venting
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by Tahany on
Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 08:07:07 PM AEST
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| love this poem... i like the anger in it and the feeling that is given off. good job |
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