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enough
Contributed by
poemwritingdude
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Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 11:10:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The slow moving ticks of the clock pass by.
I sit in regret and ask myself why?
How could you tell such an ugly lie?
Why couldnt you remember?
The pain suffered is too much to stand,
And I miss the times I held your hand,
When nothing mattered and no one cared.
When we thought that we were meant to be.
But the clock never stops.
It will always tick by.
Time will waste away in our pool of Heartache
And will forever remain just a memory
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2004-06-17 23:10:57]
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Re: enough
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 11:18:06 PM AEST
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wow, very much emotion I loved this piece...its something my ex would write to me...and thats the only bad part because it reminds me of him...but still the writing of ot and the flow is just amazing I loved it keep it up...
read and comment my stuff if you want I'd love to hear what you think...
much love,
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Re: enough
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by Seans_Girl on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 12:28:55 AM AEST
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Very touching piece. It hurts when someone you care for so much tells you a lie when you thought that you could trust them. I've been there and had that done to me. Take care and godbless. Also read and comment some of my poetry if you would please. Thanks :)
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Re: enough
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by shelby on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 12:49:51 AM AEST
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emotional write easy to read flowing simply lovely
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Re: enough
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by pixie on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 06:15:59 AM AEST
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great poem,
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Re: enough
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by HuGzNkIsSeS on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 07:29:45 AM AEST
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| great poem. |
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Re: enough
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by EternitysLyre on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 01:47:17 PM AEST
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| Trite. |
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