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Act
Contributed by
willow_tara72002
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Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 11:34:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I see the things you so
I can see right through
I see the way you act
And i know its not a fact
The act that your happy,
But your not
Theres a mask that you bought,
With your sorrow
There is pain that you fought,
And still fight
You want to make things right
On the outside you act happy and fine
But on the inside you are crying and dying
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2004-06-17 23:34:23]
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Re: Act
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by Angel_From_Heaven on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 12:05:43 AM AEST
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| Good poem, nice write, keep on writing! :) |
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Re: Act
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 07:40:15 PM AEST
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| This is a very cool poem. I hope you are enduring and not giving up. Sometimes the world keeps taking from you and beating you down that's when you have to go somewhere quiet and replenish yourself. Thanks for reminding me of that. |
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