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Punk Rock and Pom Poms Don't Mix
Contributed by
paper-heart-hero
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Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 01:46:55 AM in AEST
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Like the start to a bad dream
You always seem to make me
With your knife in this gunfight
Youre always by my side
Im just here for the sorrow
Blocking bullets
Till tomorrow
Stay out of the light
Or you just might
Go like a hero, on the bathroom floor
Begging for more
This is the last time I die
Staring in your killing eyes
I always thought the best things were free
Delicious and vulnerable
You just said youre too cool
Why are you with me
Revenge is such an ugly word
Its the only one you ever heard
Timing is the key for you
Now we fade to black
As your veins collapse
Did you know, I love you too
This is the last time I die
Staring in your killing eyes
I always thought the best things were free
Delicious and vulnerable
You just said youre too cool
Why are you with me
Scribbled notes of long lost hopes
Lacerations on your throat
And you just said youre too cool
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Re: Punk Rock and Pom Poms Don't Mix
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 02:02:50 AM AEST
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it doesnt matter your intrest...Im going by the title and being yourself gets you the best people...you cant make that a barricade you like what you like...and thats all there is to it...I however can totally see this coming to a song...haha punk rock...thats my kind of music...good stuff...keep it up...I loved it...Great write!!!
read and comment my stuff if you want Id love to hear what you think...
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Re: Punk Rock and Pom Poms Don't Mix
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by little_genna on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 03:34:08 AM AEST
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wow these are such great lyrics and would make an excellent song. you have real talent. different things do mix if the people are willing to try. i dont see the point in putting up boundaries just because you may come from different groups. hey but i love punk rock!!
love and hugs
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Re: Punk Rock and Pom Poms Don't Mix
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 04:09:02 AM AEST
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"I’m just here for the sorrow
Blocking bullets
Till tomorrow"
That's a great image and great rhyme you made there, Hero. I do enjoy reading and thinking about the tunes you might put to these enticing lyrics of yours.
Inventive and emotive. 5 stars. |
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Re: Punk Rock and Pom Poms Don't Mix
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 12:25:58 AM AEST
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| James, this was a wonderful write. Glad you're posting again. |
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