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All I am
Contributed by
bohemian_with_a_pen
on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 03:34:02 AM in AEST
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All I am is
A lonely girl
Silently going crazy in her room
And all I know is
If I try 2 keep my silence
It will be a lonely fall
All I want
All I NEED
Is my hero, in
Under my skin.
You were my Idol
My infected visions
Cant they see?
Everyone is slowly dying.
If I close my eyes
And wake up
In a different place
With a different name
Could I save you?
I cant love you
If you never were.
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2004-06-18 03:34:02]
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Re: All I am
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 03:38:49 AM AEST
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hey there!
remember me?
anyway, i liked your poem...
it was very thought-provoking..
great work!
katie |
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Re: All I am
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by little_genna on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 03:59:27 AM AEST
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i guess the words to meant is this line "Is my hero, in" i really liked this poem i feel like this alot of the time and its most recently. this is a great poem. keep writing!
love and hugs
XgenX
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Re: All I am
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by pixie on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 05:37:19 AM AEST
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great write
pixie xx |
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Re: All I am
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by Luinil on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 06:15:27 AM AEST
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| great wording * |
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Re: All I am
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by Deleterious_Dislike on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 04:32:37 AM AEST
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This poem could be interpretated in a drug thirsty way.
Its interesting. |
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