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The box
Contributed by
jackee_line
on
Friday, 18th October 2002 @ 08:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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In the box ,I don't want to be
alone with my thoughts.
Afraid of these feelings consumming me
how to get out, I plainly forgot.
I must get through this
before I am missed.
In the box, I don't want to be
so dark and gloomy is how I feel.
Four walls closing in around me
must remember to breath.
The shadows surrounding my body
like hot prickly fingers, grabbing at me.
In this box, I don't want to be
please help me.
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jackee_line
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2002-10-18 08:00:00]
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Re: The box
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by Rocks on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 10:52:36 PM AEST
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| i've had times like these. i hope you will find(or probably you already found) your way out. very strong words; almost make me claustrophobic. |
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Re: The box
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by LayDownPlayDead on
Wednesday, 11th December 2002 @ 12:13:09 PM AEST
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| I think alot of people feel like this sometimes. Some people feel like this more than others, I can relate to you. Good Write. |
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Re: The box
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by riverofwords on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 07:00:11 AM AEST
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been there done that ..great write
peace be your journey
terry |
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