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Tormented Mind Games
Contributed by
jt
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Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 09:53:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Alone with the black velvet of night and a handful of thoughts
A bottle in hand to numb the pain you created
Gentle whispers of the world wash
over a tormented mind
But the bottle it helped. Comforted. Sedated
All thats been seen and been done falls down to this moment in time
From the love thats been felt to the one
thats now hated
Wanting to fall from the face of the earth
to embrace the sky
Escape from this life that you have desecrated
Fooling the crowd while still wishing there will be a tomorrow
Another day to fight a wasted cause for no one
And once again the screaming spills forth from the words filled with hate
And the wishes are burned and the
dreams are undone
An unrecognisable man staring back
from the mirror
Forewarning of the lies that are still
yet to be spun
Reaching out through the dark with cold fingers to wrap round the throat
To extinguish the life before it has begun
Copyright ©
jt
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2004-06-18 09:53:07]
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Re: Tormented Mind Games
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by 01_zanzebar on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 10:06:51 AM AEST
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Fantaschtish, i thourorly enjoyed this poem from start to finish, shame you couldn't pull off a few more versus' but as i said before, brilliant stuff mate, I'll prolly spend the rest of today reading the stuff you write and have commented upon
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Re: Tormented Mind Games
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by pixie on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 10:14:33 AM AEST
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wow this is great keep em comin and I will keep reading and commenting......
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