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No Mans Land
Contributed by
SweetRhythm
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Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 10:59:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Staring hopelessly at the glass
Trying to distinguish its righful class
What exactly it provides me with
Amongst this sinful mass
I know the glass is partly empty but it is also partly full
So what one should rightly do, Is try to figure out what is best for who
It's only thou who can choose to see exactly what is best for me
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2004-06-18 10:59:16]
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Re: No Mans Land
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by Colleen on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 11:08:46 AM AEST
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| I really like this poem. I often feel the same way. Good write! |
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Re: No Mans Land
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 11:31:27 AM AEST
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I choose half empty, as I don't know what the glass is filled with. It might be cherry coke, for all I know - and that would probably make you puke. The safest option is half empty, so you don't have to drink so much.
Nice poem. I was drawn in by your introduction, as it alluded to some kind of dreamy inspiration. It certainly made me think.
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Re: No Mans Land
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by jonteD on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 02:40:14 PM AEST
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| Good write |
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