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Obliviously Aware
Contributed by
SensitiveSoAbused
on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 12:40:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Obliviously Aware
My psyche
Is?
What I am aware of,
But unaware, explosions
Reverberate in the Subconscious
Depth of my mind
Boom. The sparks fly.
Through all this, I am still
Oblivious
Happily trailing away
In my own world;
Everything is
Perceived
Differently,
Foggy,
But Only to you.
To me; clear,
Ordinary.
No One can disturb me,
I am drifting
Listlessly
Euphoric about my world,
Because my world is in the world,
Yet not of it...
It stretches to the outer recesses
Of the Universe
And yet
It does not escape
My head.
Staring, I
Cannot
See anything.
Yet my eyes are
Wide open.
What is the reason for this
Blindness...?
I feel
Scared.
Wait --
I can see, but what I see is
Tainted
By the
Disability
Lurking around the corner.
It deceives...
Truth
is one with
Lies.
And I am
paranoid
Of the future...
Yes, I feel it too,
the
Tension...
Pushing,
Pulling...
You must help me
out of my world...
silence.
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SensitiveSoAbused
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2004-06-18 12:40:57]
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Re: Obliviously Aware
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by deathdrop on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 12:53:22 PM AEST
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interesting...
your use of spaced out words in the lay out of this, prove that your thoughts were going round and round.
yes, i see the change in your work too.
you should defently keep up your poetry though!
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Re: Obliviously Aware
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by freespirit on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 12:56:18 PM AEST
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| good poem keep them comming |
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Re: Obliviously Aware
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by Broken_Skin on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 04:36:57 AM AEST
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Very good, the layout compliments very well
I like this style, i see the change
I prefer your newer style
its more mature and layered
very good
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