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The Dream Remains Untold
Contributed by
parkman
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Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 02:20:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Up against the black wall
Trying not to fight
I cannot take the strain
When the wall is white
What you see is written
The story will unfold
The story hides a dream
The dream is still untold
Tucked up high and mighty
Tucked up smug and cosy
Pepped up more than likely
The story hides a dream
The dream remains untold
Copyright ©
parkman
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2004-06-18 14:20:51]
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Re: The Dream Remains Untold
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by shelby on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 02:24:51 PM AEST
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full marks for this one great job
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Re: The Dream Remains Untold
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by kidpoet_213 on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 02:32:37 PM AEST
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Great job... I liked that one...
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