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Beautiful Halloween
Contributed by
deadbloodyrose
on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 02:33:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Winding through unending roads
The blood-soaked cloak freely flows
The moon glows down an eerie red
Engulfing all, alive and dead
A figure stops and steps to bare
A beautiful man with flowing hair
His eyes are closed from cause of death
He's wrapped in the cloak and laid to rest
The figure starts to turn to leave
But something bumps against his knees
He turns to look and chokes a scream
He knows this has to be a dream
From the ground emerges a body
Its' flesh is torn, its' bones are rotting
The ghoul lunges for the kill
But stops and gurgles and falls ill
From behind a cloak whips wildly
A beautiful man stands, smiling mildly
His skin is cold from cause of death
The man cannot obtain rest
The figure turns to run, to hide
But fangs peirce his neck, sinking deep inside
As the cloak wraps around in bloody desire
Here now feasts the new-born vampire
The moon glows down a wicked red
Reviving those that should be dead
So go run home, and don't you scream
For tonight's another beautiful halloween
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deadbloodyrose
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2004-06-18 14:33:14]
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Re: Beautiful Halloween
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by pixie on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 02:44:15 PM AEST
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brilliant poem, tell Jeff he has great talent
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Re: Beautiful Halloween
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by shelby on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 02:47:34 PM AEST
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Halloween is my favorite and tell him yes yes yes this is very good
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Re: Beautiful Halloween
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by MLCstar on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 11:28:21 PM AEST
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| There is something special about Halloween. Tell Jeff that I think this is fantastic. The poem captures your attention and keeps it the whole way through. I really liked this one. If you want another poem about a vampire hunt, check out my "Nocturnal Kiss" poem. I like Jeff's style. He should post more. |
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