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Listen.....Poslouchej....
Contributed by
Aika
on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 03:11:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Listen, can you hear?
Echo sounds here
Its you again walking
To your land secret
Long stairs down
You always walked
On one of each stair
Candle you found
Listen, now can you hear?
Echo sounds here
Your hearts loud beat
And your knees shivering
You lightened candle
Put it on your parth
They illumined the way
To your paradise
Strain your ears, can you hear?
No, as your eyes deceive you
The candles are going out
And strangles you fear
No, you cant hear,
Burtn ones you count down
While another ones
Lighten up your new path
No, this stream of tears
Will douse the blaze
Your paradise comes to end
And darkness will govern again
Dont read their shape
Dont measure brightness
Dont trust the wind
Dont look for fairness
By wax trickled down
In your paradise
Once for ever written
Will be all memoirs
Poslouchej, sly?
Ozvěna se rozlh,
To jak znovu krč
Do svho tajemna
Dlouh schoditě dolů
Po kterm krčelas
Vdy na jednom ze schodů
Svčku nalezlas
Sly, tak u sly?
Ozvěna se rozlh,
Jak tv srdce bu
A třesou se ti kolena
Zaplilas svčku
Na cestu postavila
Ony ozřily cestičku
S kadou ble jsi rji byla
Napni sluch, sly?
Ne, protoe mm tě zrak
Svčky dohasnaj
A tebe dus strach
Bvalas ťastn
A směvem jiskrnm
Očima jasnma
Rozdvala ses svcm
Ne, nesly, nemůe
Protoe počt zhasnajc
Na cestičku jinou teď
Ty zbyl ti svt
Ne, ten potok slz
Uhas jejich zř
Tv tajemno udus
Zavldne temnota zas
Nečti v jejich tvaru,
Neměř světlost
Nevěř větru
Nehledej spravedlnost
Z vosku skapanho
Ti jednou pro vdy
V tvm rji zapsan
Zůstanou vzpomnky
Copyright ©
Aika
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2004-06-18 15:11:08]
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Re: Listen.....Poslouchej....
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by emystar on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 07:14:01 PM AEST
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Very different but written well.
huggs,
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Re: Listen.....Poslouchej....
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 06:53:30 AM AEST
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Once again Aika, you have produced a poem that enchants from start to finish.
A lost soul searching for the answers in this one I think.
steve
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Re: Listen.....Poslouchej....
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by Falloftheangels on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 04:57:33 PM AEST
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Wow. That was really-- this is going to sound lame but whatever- beautiful! You have real talent keep writing.
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