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SWEETEN MY COFFEE
Contributed by
SHE
on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 05:31:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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YOU MUST SWEETEN ..
MY COFFEE IN EVERY WAY
WITH LOVES HONEY KISS
TAKE ME EACH DAY
TO YOUR HEAVENLY BLISS
TOUCH MY MIND
WITH STRAWBERRY SWEET
TAKE MY HUNGERY HEART
THAT WILDLY BEATS
HOLD MY TREMBLING BODY
THAT PATIENTLEY WAITS
THE SULTRY PASSION ON MY FACE
CARRY ME TO WHERE
MY HEART WILL RACE
AN EXCITING LOVELY PLACE
Copyright ©
SHE
... [
2004-06-18 17:31:16]
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Re: SWEETEN MY COFFEE
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 05:48:51 PM AEST
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| The caps have to go, I hate a poem shouted at me and your structure is not good. You need definite work on your style. |
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