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Someone...Somewhere
Contributed by
Mick_Puttock
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Friday, 18th October 2002 @ 10:45:00 AM in AEST
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someone to love
someone to hold
someone to cuddle up to
whilst we both grow old
someone who doesn't mind
walking hand in hand
while making silly footprints
all across the sand
someone to sit with
watching the setting sun
sharing the brilliant color
that has just begun
someone whispering sweet nothings,
when there's nothing left to say
just being there for each other,
in every special way
someone to share with,
through those lonely nights
someone to keep warm
while holding each other tight
someone to wake up to
as a new day begins
discovering in each other
feelings both outside and within
someone to help make life
a loving experience
the good times and bad
should make no difference
someone to steal a sweet kiss
every now and then
someone to love forever,
but now I wonder when
Mick Puttock
Copyright ©
Mick_Puttock
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Re: Someone...Somewhere
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Friday, 18th October 2002 @ 10:48:17 AM AEST
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| Lovely write, hope you find that someone |
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Re: Someone...Somewhere
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 18th October 2002 @ 12:00:04 PM AEST
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Awww my friend, the time will come when you will find that someone..and I'll be so happy for you....and your tribe. Lovely write.
Hugs,
Jen |
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Re: Someone...Somewhere
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by Lia on
Friday, 18th October 2002 @ 12:57:39 PM AEST
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| But Mick, until that moment arrives, you have the truest of love right there next to you...your children. :) |
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Re: Someone...Somewhere
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 18th October 2002 @ 01:46:47 PM AEST
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What a beautiful poem! That someone will turn up some day! Probably saying the same thing!
Christina |
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Re: Someone...Somewhere
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by viola on
Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 08:20:39 PM AEST
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| there's always someone. look foward to reading about them when they arrive. |
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Re: Someone...Somewhere
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by SA_RA on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 09:09:14 PM AEST
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Love is everywhere,
just let your heart to arrive there....
I always trully admired each of your poems. |
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Re: Someone...Somewhere
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 10:36:12 AM AEST
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| wow Mick...I know this feeling and can relate to your loneliness. Great write! A friend of mine, from Australia too, has a site, www.poetrypen.com/lovingwhispers. If you have the time visit it and read her writes. Not trying to fix you up..lol just want you to see her words. Again great write! :o) Larry |
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Re: Someone...Somewhere
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by OreO on
Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 02:50:04 PM AEST
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Wow this is beautiful
hard to beleive you haven't
found that girl yet. Thank you
for sharing this one it's
a masterpiece!
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Someone...Somewhere
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by Mya on
Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 04:32:48 PM AEST
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| Very nice Mick I liked it. Happy writin |
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Re: Someone...Somewhere
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by Smooth on
Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 04:56:33 PM AEST
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| A true romantic ... glad to know we are still out there, you've summed up what all of us are thinking, feeling and wanting. Well done, touching and it makes you think. Look forward to reading more of your work. |
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Re: Someone...Somewhere
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by uchendu on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 11:30:28 AM AEST
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| Mick! U have a talent..get on lol..blessings to ya |
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Re: Someone...Somewhere
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by lovesucks on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 08:44:42 PM AEST
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I really wonder when too.. I loved this every word great write... keep up the excellent work on this site. I was gone for a while but have recently returned I always loved this site when it has really grown lots of expression, and diversity.
Love It
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Re: Someone...Somewhere
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by inoc on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 07:46:10 AM AEST
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Bravo!
A beautiful write / a beautiful way to spend a life / Hope your someone someday will soon come your way / perhaps your poem will be then -real life /
cheers!
Inoc |
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Re: Someone...Somewhere
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2008 @ 05:12:45 PM AEST
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a special poem. i particularly enjoyed this bit:
discovering in each other
feelings both outside and within
brilliant. the whole poem was a joy to read.
-phil
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