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Release
Contributed by
despised_freak
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Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 10:50:59 PM in AEST
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The pain is such a release
Release from the frustration and anger
Release from everything
The pain is a rush
The feeling of the blade cutting into my skin is numbing
The pain sets in
One cut is never enough
So I cut and cut until I’m satisfied
But I will never be completely satisfied until the day of my death
I want death so bad I can taste it
A few more cuts here and there
Blood pouring
Death is drawing near
In a few more hours I will be dead
In a few more hours I will be free from everything
Free from the thoughts that cloud my head
Here I go
One more breath
Make it good
Here comes my death
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Re: Release
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 10:58:04 PM AEST
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wow, that was very powerful...very sad...I know how you feel I have written many of my poems about my cutting and suicide attempts...but Im trying to pull away from it all...I hope you decide to also...keep you head up, keep your writing the same way...I love it....
read and comment my stuff if you want id love to hear what you think...
much love,
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Re: Release
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 09:49:49 PM AEST
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| very emotional. great write. |
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