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Picture
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Dusty
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Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 12:34:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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I have heard it said a picture's worth 1000 words,
I have written volumes, I don't know if you have heard,
A photo is all I have to base my opinions on,
Who the hell knows, I could be right, I could be wrong,
But I make assumptions, based upon your look,
I feel pain and anger from that picture that I took,
I see pent up rage and sadness is there, too,
I want to reach out, but there's nothing I can do,
It's only a picture, after all, one moment in time,
So all I could do for you was compose this little rhyme.
Copyright ©
Dusty
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2004-06-19 00:34:06]
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Re: Picture
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by pixie on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 08:35:36 AM AEST
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I am impressed by your work, I have not read many, but now I have started to read I look forward to seeing more from you
pixie xx |
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Re: Picture
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by waos on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 12:04:53 AM AEST
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| thats really good. i like how you talk about a picture. its yeah...just cool. |
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Re: Picture
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Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 08:59:26 AM AEST
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Wonder poem...very intriguing ...I love how you described the emotions that you see in this picture.....
Lena |
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Re: Picture
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by angelav on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 10:20:38 PM AEST
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| I'm really enjoying your poetry. Your structure is always sound, the pacing is easy and satisying. You're a terrific poet. |
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