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How You Feel
Contributed by
willow_tara72002
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Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 12:36:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I dont know how you feel
Dont you know this things real
Ive wanted this to happen forever.
Better things were the last time
When we were doing just fine.
Please tell me how you feel
So I cant help you heal
Tell me when you dont want me around,
Ill fall to the ground,
But Ill leave
It hurts when you say that to me
When I am near you Im happy
nervous with excitement
Heart racing,
Im not exaggerating
Tell me when you dont want me around.
Ill fall to the ground,
But Ill leave
It hurts when you say that to me
You dont want to be seen
Talking to me
I understand that you dont want them to know.
But you dont have to leave,
Or avoid me, you see
Just talk to me please
I dont know how you feel
Please tell me how you feel.
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Re: How You Feel
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by luckycharm on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 08:04:27 AM AEST
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This poem is very sad and filled with alot of emotion towards the person you are refering
to. Hope that you feel better and that things do work out for you.-luckycharm. |
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Re: How You Feel
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by pixie on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 08:37:23 AM AEST
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awwww this is so sad, I can feel your pain through your writing.......hope you work things out soon, you written about it very well,
pixie xx |
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Re: How You Feel
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by hooray_its_jen on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 10:40:40 AM AEST
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Wow, this one is really sad. It's filled with so much emotion. I enjoyed this a lot, keep using your talent!
~Jenna |
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