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Don't Touch Me
Contributed by
HellsLibrarian
on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 12:59:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The sight of you makes me sick inside;
my chest aches with fear and rage
Your hands on me- unclean;
your lips on my hair- obscene
You call me you daughter in front of all and sundry;
even with your true children you have dirty laundry
dont touch me
When I sense you coming near,
my body jerks and my skin quivers
quickly controlled, lest you see
And in my head I hear
a small voice, and it whimpers,
Stay away, go away, stay away from me
stay away, stay away, go away, please. . .
dont touch me
Its just your way of expressing
your affection, you say
Well, I dont want it, you sick, twisted prick
I dont want it. Go away.
dont touch me
Supposedly safe,
while you're here I hide.
I don't come out until
I know youve gone; and I refuse to cry.
Im quiet and still,
and though I feel the chill
of hatred seeping from my deadened heart,
its with relief that I sigh.
LEAVE ME ALONE!;
dont touch me
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Re: Don't Touch Me
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by emystar on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 01:05:53 AM AEST
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Very strong write!
luv, huggs,
emy
I can relate. |
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Re: Don't Touch Me
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 01:14:33 AM AEST
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Emotional and powerful piece of work. I am so sorry you have to have these feelings. Just protect yourself the best you can.
Rita |
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Re: Don't Touch Me
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by Vermillion on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 02:14:37 AM AEST
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a very emotionally powerful write. keep writing,excellent work
~vermillion~ |
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Re: Don't Touch Me
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by thumper on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 06:11:56 AM AEST
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Very Strong emotion! And you're right, sometimes life isn't happy. Be careful, and I hope you find peace.
Thumps ; 0 ) |
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Re: Don't Touch Me
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by carmen_queasy on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 06:28:41 AM AEST
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| That was powerful. |
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Re: Don't Touch Me
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by deadbloodyrose on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 04:24:52 PM AEST
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| very emotional and poweful.. i cant relate well.. a good write.. nice job.. AMI JO |
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Re: Don't Touch Me
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by spider on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 07:52:16 AM AEST
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very powerful write....
like the way all your poems flow so well. |
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