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The Silent Screams
Contributed by
MrMojoRisin
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Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 01:36:13 PM in AEST
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A thousand screams pierce the air
Silent screams, unborn screams
Children robbed of life
Yet you cannot hear
The screams I hear
You cannot feel the guilt
Humanity must bear
As the new slaughter
Of the innocents
Continues on and on
And at your feet you cannot see
This bloody river raging
Down your streets and
O'er your bloodtsained hands
And you sit there and ignore
The chills running down my spine
And the screams piercing
The sacred silent night.
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MrMojoRisin
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2004-06-19 13:36:13]
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Re: The Silent Screams
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 01:44:31 PM AEST
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wow, that is a very sad , yet emotional lot of feeling i enojoyed this....I loved it....keep it up
read and comment mine if you want, Id love to hear what you think...
much love,
Dani |
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Re: The Silent Screams
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by pyrofairyburning on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 01:56:53 PM AEST
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I like it very much, but may I point out a few things that could be changes? Second to last stanza, wouldn't the idea of 'bloodstained' be after hands. Before implies they were already bloody. Or maybe I'm confused. And maybe it should be "ignore the chills running down your// spine" instead of mine. Just my thoughts. Anywho, A very good read indeed. 9 and ¾ outa 10.
Blessed Be,
Tink |
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Re: The Silent Screams
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 02:11:24 PM AEST
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| excellent write. very sad indeed. |
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Re: The Silent Screams
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by deathdrop on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 03:14:01 PM AEST
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i know what screems you are talking about.
and hey! i'm no one to talk as i cant' do it myself, but you really need to over come them or they will continue to over come you! |
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