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shower
Contributed by
angrycheerios
on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 06:17:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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I stand
in the shower
Just past the water
and watch it in front of me
moving so fiercly
it crashes against the slippery,tricky, tile
with such a sound
and it never hesitates
Moving so that i can tell
it doesnt see me there
I reach
my hand out
and watch the water pour so quickly
through my hands
it frightens me how fast it goes
it rushes past me as if i am an incovienence
a detour to its plan
and it angrily shuffles down the drain
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Re: shower
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by buchi on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 03:02:38 PM AEST
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Human imagination, even the total effect itself of the poem is but one of its components...
narrowness of your focus is commendable...you are a poet!!! |
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