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Releasing The Dark
Contributed by
TwEeK
on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 08:54:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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empty blackness fills me
my mind
my soul
just empty and black
dark and endless
it echos through my eyes
when you look into my eyes
you see this endless pit of darkness
the darkness that cloaks me away from humanity
humanity
oh that word just sounds so evil and hate filled
humanity is what turned me this way
turned me against everyone
against my self
and all who loved me
who had loved me
untill they found out who i really was
and were too scared to ever look me straight in the eyes again
i scare people
i ever scare myself
so here i lie
never to give another care in the world
just to end it all
right here right now
my blood seeps into pools on the floor
showing my scarred ugly face in the ripples
i shudder and smash at it with my hands makeing the image drift away
i begin to feel faint as i rise to my knees
dipping my finger in my blood i scrall on the wall
my suicide note my death threat
ONLY YOU CAN DO THIS TO A PERSON
KILL THEM EACH DAY
AND NOT CARE AS THEY MELT OFF SLOWLY
BUT YOU WILL BE NEXT
JUST YOU WAIT
GOOD BYE AND GOOD RIDDANC......
the last letters trail off as i slump to the floor
dead
freed from this constant torure
the empty blackness now added to the darkining sky
looking down on all the sinners
smileing as few and few give way
Copyright ©
TwEeK
... [
2004-06-19 20:54:45]
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Re: Releasing The Dark
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by shelby on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 09:08:29 PM AEST
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a true shocker made me chill from head to toe a great write but Im hoping that your not serious in doing this to yourself
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Re: Releasing The Dark
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 09:08:34 PM AEST
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this was veruy sad and dark I enjoyed reading it however...I have written many suicide poems...and yes suicide is a drag well keep up your work...keep it coming
read and comment my stuff if you want Id love to hear what you think...
much love,
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Re: Releasing The Dark
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by InnerBeautyQueen on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 09:16:01 PM AEST
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i liked this
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