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Climbing the Mountain
Contributed by
iluvpencils
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Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 09:11:37 PM in AEST
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I've climbed my way up this mountain
Now I got to find a way to
Get back down again
Thunderstorms try to drown out
All those voices in your head
Lightning reminds me of
Of what you said
You said
"I've climbed my way up this mountain,
Now I've got to find a way to
Get back down again"
Don't jump off when the train's still moving
Just wait the tunnels through
I'm going to find
Something worth losing
I'm goint to pick myself
Back up again
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2004-06-19 21:11:37]
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Re: Climbing the Mountain
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by shelby on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 09:50:16 PM AEST
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you already have you already have!! Wonderful piece
Michelle |
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Re: Climbing the Mountain
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by betty on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 11:07:25 PM AEST
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Good use of repetition and imagery.
Isn't it great to have your strength challenged. |
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Re: Climbing the Mountain
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by waos on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 11:37:10 PM AEST
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| thanks for posting something that had a hopeful ending. thats a real nice change from what i usually write and read. good job. |
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Re: Climbing the Mountain
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 11:41:01 PM AEST
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Very nice I liked this one and its good to get back up again. I hope the best for you.
~Kris~ |
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