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Slowly creeps My Soul
Contributed by
Valerie_Pearson
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Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 09:22:03 PM in AEST
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Beyond the sunrise, before the dawn,
O' patience sky, I hear you calling,
I lose myself inside you,
in still of thought, waiting patiently,
I cannot walk away, I smell my birth,
I can taste heaven, somewhere in the deep blue sky,
I know you're there,
I reach for you, but this bondage holds me down,
awaken me, touch my skin,
I'm bleeding on the inside where my tears have been,
Hello Heaven, I hear you calling,
but my eyes can only see the earthly flowers,
my tears can only form another stream,
Time's winged chariot hurrying close,
through these crystal clouds,
Night is just a memory when I'm sleeping,
the pain surreal, these labored tears are dropping,
my meditative mind reaching out to me,
beyond the sunrise, before the dawn,
slowly creeps my soul !
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Valerie_Pearson
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Re: Slowly creeps My Soul
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by shelby on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 09:48:34 PM AEST
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Oh Valerie my heart goes out to you I have a tear or two here to shed with you this touched me deeply hugs my friend
Michelle |
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Re: Slowly creeps My Soul
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by rugby_player on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 10:25:33 PM AEST
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| hey great job. I loved this. it really touched me. Feel free to read and comment on some of my stuff |
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Re: Slowly creeps My Soul
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 11:36:42 PM AEST
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Valerie, I am so sorry for the losses you have had to endure. I know your heart aches for them. No words I can offer can ease the pain but know that I do pray for strength for you.
Bless you,
Rita |
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Re: Slowly creeps My Soul
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 02:33:37 AM AEST
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| Valerie, my prayers are with you and your husband ... life should not be so cruel ... your poetry tears at the heart ... Jan |
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Re: Slowly creeps My Soul
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by pixie on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 08:25:13 AM AEST
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great poem, very touching
pixie xx |
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Re: Slowly creeps My Soul
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 12:18:29 PM AEST
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Val,when I read this all that came to mind was when I chatted with you on the phone how sad I was for you & your fam. No one should have to go thru that but i feel God knows that you trust him & love him to take care of your children.
I ache for you! Christina |
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Re: Slowly creeps My Soul
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 05:13:51 AM AEST
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| Great poem ..great imagery and I can feel your grief...venkat |
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Re: Slowly creeps My Soul
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 05:13:53 AM AEST
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| Great poem ..great imagery and I can feel your grief...venkat |
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Re: Slowly creeps My Soul
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by InnerBeautyQueen on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 09:18:34 PM AEST
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| bella!!! very good |
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Re: Slowly creeps My Soul
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by RaineBurkhart on
Thursday, 17th May 2007 @ 01:45:28 AM AEST
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OKay Val when i read this one all i could think about was losing some close, wanting to be with them in heaven but there are so many people on earth that need you....your words are a wonderful choice....i really like it....
~*RAINE*~ |
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