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Cloudy Life
Contributed by
Seans_Girl
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Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 10:18:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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The clouds so stormy
Dark and deep
That was the night I couldn't sleep
The sky was gloomy with no twinkles in sight
With no dances of moonlight all through the night
The pitch black feeling that I had that night
Was then that I realized I had no light
Then with a quick flash from my past
I knew my life couldn't last
I knew just how to end my life
With the dreadful bloody knife
Copyright ©
Seans_Girl
... [
2004-06-19 22:18:21]
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Re: Cloudy Life
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by betty on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 10:23:59 PM AEST
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| That was amazing. So you were 10!! Maybe you are some kind of genious. Great poem. -betty |
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Re: Cloudy Life
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by InnerBeautyQueen on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 10:26:08 PM AEST
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whoa! natalie, thats gooooood! like really good! wow
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Re: Cloudy Life
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 10:36:31 PM AEST
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Nat I loved this...a lot it is how I feel today and all the other days...well keep it up...
much love,
Dani |
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