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universe
Contributed by
rugby_player
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Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 11:19:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
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We lay there
on a blanket
Letting the moonlight bounce off our bodies
I look into your eyes
I realize
You are the one i want to be with
For the rest of my life
Who knew three words could be so hard to say
I try to get the courage
Its on the tip of my tounge
By the time i gather the courage
Sadly your eyes are closed and ready to sleep
I look at your face
Its as beautiful as a shooting star
Your hair flows like a water fall
Cascading down
As you drift off to sleep
I kiss your forehead
And whisper in your ear
Those three little words that are so hard to speak
I LOVE YOU
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Re: universe
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 11:26:05 PM AEST
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aw, by far the cest poem I have read by you, this was so beautifully written...I loved it so very much it remnds me of one time I was in the same situation...only fake sleeping and when he did what you did...I was smiling inside...keep up the good work...lots of emotion and feeling is expressed through this...
much love,
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Re: universe
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by emystar on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 12:32:56 AM AEST
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This such an awesome heavenly beautifull write.
Shows your special tender side which I find an admirable quality in a male species.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: universe
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by holderofthestone on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 01:35:07 AM AEST
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| sometimes its hard to say those words no matter how much you reall want to. another good poem filled with alot of real emotions. A+++ |
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Re: universe
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 08:59:20 PM AEST
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| very true. great write. |
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