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Dead and Dying
Contributed by
Dead_Next_Tuesday
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Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 12:17:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Dead and dying
Distressed and crying
Sorrowful and sighing
But still here, by your side.
Pained and bleeding
Empty and needing
Begging and pleading
For you to be by mine.
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Dead_Next_Tuesday
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Re: Dead and Dying
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by betty on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 12:57:58 AM AEST
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nice, strange poem.
you should check out "desperate girl". -betty |
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Re: Dead and Dying
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 07:26:46 AM AEST
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| your cool, I'll be checking for your latest artistic updates. Heh... |
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Re: Dead and Dying
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by hisbeautifulnightmare on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 03:30:04 PM AEST
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| it should be longer....i like how the last one doesn't rhyme tho.... |
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