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unfold
Contributed by
rhei76
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Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 12:18:58 AM in AEST
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Well, well what can I say
The sun is going down
It was a beautiful day
Now, now I chase thru sleep and space
The moon is going down
What a beautiful taste
When we tear thru the real
I say we're going down
You know ya love the feel
While we remember the days of old
As we dream of going down
Where the bliss of feeling is told
Well, well what can I say
I'm lost in a dream
From a different life
Now, now I'm stuck trying to scream
Thinking I'll never have a wife
What taste so beautiful
I feel stranded, my mind feels weak
I'm codependant not just a freak
I swear to you
I will never leave you in the cold
Cuz I dream of going down
where our bliss in love unfolds
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Re: unfold
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by betty on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 12:47:03 AM AEST
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great poem!!!!
Never think you won't have a wife. Women are raised to be wives- their very training insist upon their only social and economical status deriving from getting married. Never fear- hegemony is on your side!!!
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Re: unfold
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by Archie on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 06:32:47 PM AEST
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| This is a good poem. it actually seems more like a rap. |
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Re: unfold
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 09:53:16 PM AEST
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| great write. i agree with archie. |
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