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Monolith
Contributed by
01_zanzebar
on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 09:31:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The seal I created when I caught the rocks clance
miles above cowered a statue as I walk in a trance
I walked across the was I cast my eyes a sordid chance
as a glimmer in their eyes as I started to dance
robbing a part of my daughter just as soon as he got close
conglomerate patterns arising in smoke billowing above tassid steam
Until I am allowed to be awoke
then at once he stroked, between me, meet the queen
returned me to the doctors scene
maybe you were keen but eyes upon my spotlight
but at last I can talk
on my microphone
rusted away
on fetid blood
and golden oil
Copyright ©
01_zanzebar
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2004-06-20 09:31:07]
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Re: Monolith
(User Rating: 1 )
by Mortis-Dark on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 03:03:33 PM AEST
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Powerfull stuff. This poem is extremly well writte.
Good Job.
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Re: Monolith
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 10:14:25 PM AEST
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| very good poem. well written. |
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