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under glass
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 12:38:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
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speak softly
hold me tightly through the night
your warm embrace
essence of the moon's light
touch my cheek
carress it sweetly; breathe into me
while the earth revolves in blissful ecstasy
run your fingers through my hair
touch me everywhere
so beautiful to hold onto
this warmth of you
under glass skylights; we see the stars
feeling the journey into our souls
to jupiter, venus and mars
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Re: under glass
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by pixie on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 12:41:52 PM AEST
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truly beautiful...... great write
pixie xx |
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Re: under glass
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by Archie on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 12:47:19 PM AEST
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| This is an amazing poem warm and encouraging. You never cease to amaze me. |
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Re: under glass
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 12:53:54 PM AEST
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Awww this is a beautiful one hon and I just lost the picture. Excellenet write from the master *grins*
Hugs 'n Love
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Re: under glass
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by shelby on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 01:00:55 PM AEST
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serene romantic pure bliss Nessa
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Re: under glass
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 01:14:03 PM AEST
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Nessa, this is so enchanting. It is wonderful to feel like that. So comfortable and loved in their arms. Your work is always beautiful.
Love n hugs,
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Re: under glass
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by Silent-No-More on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 01:23:58 PM AEST
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Ok.... I'm entirely jealous! Of the write AND what inspired it! *sigh*
*smile*
SNM |
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Re: under glass
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 02:03:21 PM AEST
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awesome write Nessa...
especially the last stanza... :) |
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Re: under glass
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 02:03:41 PM AEST
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soft, sweet, beautiful
Shari |
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Re: under glass
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 02:11:46 PM AEST
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This was absolutely beautiful, Nessa. So romantic. Great write.
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Re: under glass
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by Lone_er on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 02:36:38 PM AEST
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| A romantic, enchanting painting of words upon my the pallette of my soul...Russ |
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Re: under glass
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 04:09:39 PM AEST
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| Nice job! It radiates warmth and love...mmmmm |
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Re: under glass
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by Merry on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 07:27:44 PM AEST
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ohhhhhh lala - sounds like romance is in the air up in the mountains -
hugs and winkies
merry |
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Re: under glass
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by BrandySwanson on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 09:13:12 PM AEST
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this was very romantic and sweet great job
Brandy |
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Re: under glass
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 11:39:50 PM AEST
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Beautiful love has found you and you depicted in the most wonderful and romantic way.
Great write Nessa, I'm glad that romance is in the air. :) |
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Re: under glass
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by venkat on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 12:03:48 AM AEST
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| Awww..my dearest friend..you have poured heavenly elexir in this Glass..wow..sweetly inebriating. ..very beautiful write. hugers.:-) venkat |
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Re: under glass
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by RonMiller on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 12:29:24 AM AEST
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A very romantic poem..
I enjoyed this a lot..
Ron |
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Re: under glass
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 01:39:18 AM AEST
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Ohh La La... This is awesome, Ness.... Love what I'm reading into this..;>)
Hugs and Love
Jenni |
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Re: under glass
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by SnowB on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 04:07:01 AM AEST
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This is a beautiful poem..I love the line "feeling the journey into our souls"..to have someone that makes you feel this way must be very special...Awesome!
Lena |
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Re: under glass
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by WinterFox on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 10:50:56 AM AEST
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A beautiful piece, nessa. So romantic.
Well done...Mike |
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Re: under glass
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 06:05:32 PM AEST
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an intimate capturing
PFR |
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Re: under glass
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by arden on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 10:43:28 PM AEST
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such a beautiful poem nessa.
nicely wrote. i enjoyed this piece.
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