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Hit Me
Contributed by
Hannah_Heaven
on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 02:41:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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you may not abuse me with fists
but words seem to hurt more
a dagger stabbed through my heart
'i hate you'
doesnt seem much with fists thats how i would like it
it would feel better
but constant headaches
and voices streaming through my mind
blurs
colours
shapes
your face
i quiver
i grovel
this hurts more
this argument never stops
when did it start?
its ***** up like my life
i dont understand it anymore
whats the use of fighting back
your ALWAYS right anyway
i never have a say
im shut out
watching the same pattern
over and over and...
like a video
but no stop just carry on...
please
can i have a break
just a second
my mind
its dead
like me
PLEASE
LISTEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
just die or somehting
crawl into a corner
and fade away
then ill be happy
smile once more
wrinkled
like a new emotion
never been tested before
first time
baby
like my new life
hopefully
you wont appear
Copyright ©
Hannah_Heaven
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2004-06-20 14:41:50]
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Re: Hit Me
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by holderofthestone on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 07:08:07 PM AEST
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| very strong and well put. I can relate with you fully here. I really enjoyed this. great piece. A++++ |
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