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Can't Block It Out.
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 02:59:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Underneath my layered skin,
I have an uncomfortable feeling within.
Be it another day, Id proberly be fine.
But today, Im almost losing my mind.
And Im feeling more trapped as I remember more pain.
My memories have expanded and it feels like Im there again.
Back in those walls I hated so much!
Im feeling the pain as it brushes its touch.
I remember when that doctor, stabbed the hole through my vein.
And my blood came out again, and I cried in emotional pain.
I can feel a cold sting, from the memories of that cell.
Behind the locked door, it was my own, private hell.
And I remember the view of the world, from above.
When I stood there on the roof, so prepared to jump.
It makes me want to cry,
Remembering all of this.
Theres no where I can hide!
And I dont wanna cut my wrist!
My life is made up of lies,
Please dont expect me, to feel warm inside.
You could never imagine,
What I went through,
What are words?
When my experience is new?
Even when Im feeling happy,
I cant block it out!
The damage is DONE! Im scarred!
Im full of my memorys shouts.
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deathdrop
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2004-06-20 14:59:52]
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Re: Can't Block It Out.
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by Mortis-Dark on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 03:10:03 PM AEST
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Underneath my layered skin,
"I have an uncomfortable feeling within.
Be it another day, I’d proberly be fine.
But today, I’m almost losing my mind.
And I’m feeling more trapped as I remember more pain.
My memories have expanded and it feels like I’m there again.
Back in those walls I hated so much!
I’m feeling the pain as it brushes its touch."
The first stanza captured me and lured me in. I felt your pain and sense of awe. This is true poetry.
(V)ortis-Dark
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Re: Can't Block It Out.
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 05:14:39 PM AEST
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good poem I know all to well what its like to want to escape, but know the next day you'll be fine. Keep up your writing.
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