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The Dating Game
Contributed by
betty
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Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 11:02:09 PM in AEST
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The game that we play
wait and see
take The Test.
how risky it is
take a chance
with your trust?
the glove didn't quite fit
will I win?
will I lose?
3 months time
and we'll know
shall I die
shall I live.
Russian roulette
one in six
better odds
than this sick twisted game
of dating and love.
Copyright ©
betty
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2004-06-20 23:02:09]
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Re: The Dating Game
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by waos on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 11:40:07 PM AEST
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sometimes i agree with love being such a twisted game... i've had a bad experience with a guy and it hurt so much... but know that there is hope too. i have a great guy friend/maybe something more.
i like how you compare it to russian roulette. thats pretty cool. and i'm sure its quite true that your odds are better then. |
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Re: The Dating Game
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by RonMiller on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 11:50:38 PM AEST
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A cool poem with food for thought...
Keep sifting through the rocks, you're bound to find gold..
Ron(still sifting) |
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Re: The Dating Game
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by pixie on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 07:58:49 AM AEST
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great poem, keep looking you will find a real diamond
pixie xx |
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Re: The Dating Game
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 12:23:46 PM AEST
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I liked this and you explain everything very well.
My favorite part would be
take The Test.
how risky it is
take a chance
with your trust?
The taking a chance with your trust is true and nicely worded. And comparing love with Russian roulette is cool because thats how it feels.
Awesome job, I loved it!
~Kris~
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Re: The Dating Game
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 03:45:11 PM AEST
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I think I may actually understand this...beautiful write very good wording and comaprisons....
much love,
Dani |
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